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The writing felt a little choppy and had me confused at times because there were too many 1st person narrators as MC's. I never knew who was speaking next and it often took a few pages to know for sure.
I started and stopped this novel quite a few times and only continued to read it because I was hoping that things would improve. They do, but only at the very end. There was just too much inconsistency of the story and characters.